This week I am critiquing my 2-pg. feature for Vox about a woman giving up her unborn baby for adoption. The article will be titled "Letting go," which I am very happy with the hed and deck final decision!
I want to have a visually intriguing spread while maintaining the seriousness of the story, but I'm having some trouble. Someone in class tonight suggested having the letters gradually separate from one another more and more as you head the head, which I thought was a good idea. I was also thinking of doing some sort of gradient in the background of the text or something, but we'll see about that. Another suggestion was having the text fade out toward the end, which was another good idea. Man, I love our brainstorming sessions in lab!
Another problem I am having is the photo options. There is one photo that everyone has agreed on, a vertical of the woman with her hand on her protruding belly, however the other photo ran over the weekend in the Missourian! The only other photo option I have is to add a photo from the ultrasound, which is a bit overwhelming when you view the photos. I'm afraid too many people will be weirded out by it. I'm thinking about designing one with the photo small and on the second page, and designing one with no ultrasound photo and having a pulled quote or the vertical photo on the second page and running my head bigger.
If you have any good ideas for me, let me know!