Critique

This week I am giving a critique of my first design for my "Vox" department: Screen. I had a bit of a miscommunication with my editors, however I don't think my spread looks to bad. It was a lot of work trying to get the right images though, but now I know how long it's going to take for next time.

I really liked coming in and working on the design over the weekend. It's nice because although I may have other stuff going on, once I get into that room everything else just vanishes and it's me and the design. It's hard at home sometimes because my dog always wants to play!

I would like to have the courage to play more with the department pages. I think I'm focused too much on must making everything fit and work together to where I tend to lose my creativity when I am in Department-page mindset. That will be my goal for my next one! I have attached the image of my spread, sort of mid-design (so it's definitely not the final). Let me know what you think.